Wednesday, April 1, 2015

FSF Challenge - Entrance

Five Sentence Fiction badge from Lillie McFerrin Writes

This week's writing challenge
Five Sentence Fiction
Lillie McFerrin Writes )
is based upon the prompt:


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie posts one word for inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.

An entrance can also be an exit. Just sayin'...

Steppin' Out

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     "I want everyone here to know," the construction supervisor screamed as he walked next to the hardening concrete of the walkway, "that I don't find this the least bit amusing. It cost a pretty penny to lay this down, and whoever did this is not only going to be fired, they're going to reimburse the company for new paving and the museum that is sponsoring the opening of this cavern to the public for lost revenue."
    The crew looked at each other shrugged.
    "For God's sake, men, setting these ridiculously huge footprints into the cement all they way to the entrance is the sort of thing I'd expect from a bunch of twelve-year-old child—"
    The supervisor cut his words short when he saw what had made the footprints leading out was now making footprints leading in.

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  1. Ooo, great take on the photo! Good piece.

    1. Thanks! I had to think about this one for a while...

  2. Nice - fun story:)

    1. Thanks for reading! It was a fun story, and I did think about it more in a comedic vein than strict horror.

  3. Uh oh...great story!

    1. Thanks! Sounds like there's going to be a whole lot of excitement in the next few minutes! And good luck getting reimbursed for the concrete...

  4. I really enjoyed this, I would like to read more. :)

    1. Thanks! If I get the right prompt, I'll see what I can do!


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