tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post8697722536805379155..comments2023-05-17T06:07:09.567-04:00Comments on K R Smith: FSF Challenge - CompanionK R Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-67251824988235973162014-04-13T22:25:41.937-04:002014-04-13T22:25:41.937-04:00Thanks, Robin! I can see you visualized the story ...Thanks, Robin! I can see you visualized the story quite well!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-84301162669503705082014-04-13T14:31:36.525-04:002014-04-13T14:31:36.525-04:00The joy of more than fifty years of life together ...The joy of more than fifty years of life together couldn't come to end for this couple. For the moment she realized he'd passed, she drank the poison from the small brown bottle. The moment she drank the life-ending potion she kissed his cold lips as caressed his lifeless body, so they would be in each other's embrace forever more. Definitely sad and quite poignant. Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-56441862409035510292014-03-31T12:34:44.245-04:002014-03-31T12:34:44.245-04:00Thank you, Sushree. It's always good to see ne...Thank you, Sushree. It's always good to see new readers! K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-48981155560325054432014-03-31T12:33:22.549-04:002014-03-31T12:33:22.549-04:00Thanks! I does have that sort of feeling. Thanks! I does have that sort of feeling. K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-82298012055783764382014-03-31T12:32:26.296-04:002014-03-31T12:32:26.296-04:00Thanks, Tess. I was trying to get that sort of con...Thanks, Tess. I was trying to get that sort of contrast, and I hope it worked. Now I have to find time to read everyone else's FSF posts for this!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-12816338046548947242014-03-31T10:25:19.546-04:002014-03-31T10:25:19.546-04:00Heart touching poetry ...Heart touching poetry ...Sushree Dashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419017717501796680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-53193016067357925062014-03-30T17:17:43.285-04:002014-03-30T17:17:43.285-04:00K.R., this is as lovely as it is tragic. Just lik...K.R., this is as lovely as it is tragic. Just like Romeo and Juliet. Very nice work. injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-61779186443978037232014-03-29T16:50:39.537-04:002014-03-29T16:50:39.537-04:00Beautiful and sad.
I like the second stanza, espec...Beautiful and sad.<br />I like the second stanza, especially "She held his hand, his dying hand". Very poignant.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-17013710451801859752014-03-29T15:03:11.219-04:002014-03-29T15:03:11.219-04:00Thanks! I wasn't sure how this would come acro...Thanks! I wasn't sure how this would come across, but I'm glad you found something in it to like.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-25526732941053407962014-03-29T14:58:28.183-04:002014-03-29T14:58:28.183-04:00Thanks! It's a sad poem with a sort of happy e...Thanks! It's a sad poem with a sort of happy ending.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-76328256315230395382014-03-29T10:40:34.924-04:002014-03-29T10:40:34.924-04:00Unique, interesting poem!Unique, interesting poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com