tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post8448987735578517421..comments2023-05-17T06:07:09.567-04:00Comments on K R Smith: FSF Challenge - WaitingK R Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-80432560438097610032014-08-30T10:08:36.612-04:002014-08-30T10:08:36.612-04:00Yes - the girl/woman has really done nothing wrong...Yes - the girl/woman has really done nothing wrong, yet she feels like a failure. Now she is venturing off to somewhere, and I don't know if she has a destination or is just trying to escape. I'd have to do a longer story to figure that one out! K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-75829073818026478722014-08-30T10:05:22.395-04:002014-08-30T10:05:22.395-04:00Thanks! There is a sort of desperate resignation e...Thanks! There is a sort of desperate resignation expressed in that line that sums up the characters feelings about her situation. also, I don't know who did the original artwork, but I really like it.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-61306245659005496932014-08-28T11:13:46.620-04:002014-08-28T11:13:46.620-04:00I agree with Pat - that last line is nice stated. ...I agree with Pat - that last line is nice stated. I also really like how she believes she's only good at waiting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14596036051571798101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-2348376730314011482014-08-28T06:40:09.446-04:002014-08-28T06:40:09.446-04:00Sad story, but often true.
"After that, the...Sad story, but often true. <br /><br />"After that, there was no real reason for her to go, but she just couldn't come up with a good reason to stay. "<br /><br />Fantastic last line - empowering. <br /><br />Great and tightly written piece. Pathttp://writeupthespine.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com