tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post7363680263979810454..comments2023-05-17T06:07:09.567-04:00Comments on K R Smith: Monday Mixer - OverkillK R Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-23131009508031101262013-08-02T13:31:46.681-04:002013-08-02T13:31:46.681-04:00Loved this, but then I always enjoy your writing! ...Loved this, but then I always enjoy your writing! Like Tess said, a very coherent story...and I love the moon twist, he's definitely in trouble now! <br />When I saw these words, I shook my head, didn't think I'd get anything out of these, but I did! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-55186342581650712092013-07-31T18:28:38.603-04:002013-07-31T18:28:38.603-04:00Some 'splainin' to do? I hear Ricky Ricar...Some 'splainin' to do? I hear Ricky Ricardo's voice, which is funny in a scifi setting.<br /><br />The devil is in the editing, isn't it? Some stories are ruined through poor editing. Yours seems to have benefited because it's very good.<br /><br />Thank you for the kind words. I don't know what kind of writer I am, where I fit. I'll give it some thought though. I Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-31875845485452421822013-07-29T20:25:48.515-04:002013-07-29T20:25:48.515-04:00I'm thinking Xilanx is going to have some expl...I'm thinking Xilanx is going to have some explaining to do the the Lunar Preservation And Redevelopment Association about the strength of his weapon!<br /><br />For me, making up the story from the prompts is fairly easy, but getting it to fit within the 150 word limit and still make sense is tough!<br /><br />I did make a few changes from my original posting that I thought made it flow K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-43968195995819873652013-07-29T18:52:45.642-04:002013-07-29T18:52:45.642-04:00Oh no! What happened to the moon?
I'm impres...Oh no! What happened to the moon?<br /><br />I'm impressed how you're able to construct an interesting and coherent story from a set list of words. I am in awe.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.com