tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post3115960984811861552..comments2023-05-17T06:07:09.567-04:00Comments on K R Smith: FSF Challenge - AbandonK R Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-59556400504648310732015-01-28T08:42:58.135-05:002015-01-28T08:42:58.135-05:00Time? It is the most precious commodity in the Uni...Time? It is the most precious commodity in the Universe - or so it seems.<br /><br />As far as the YA story, even if it isn't selected for publication, I'll make sure you get to read it.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-478698614752387992015-01-27T19:53:57.352-05:002015-01-27T19:53:57.352-05:00Time? What is this thing you call time?
Looking f...Time? What is this thing you call time?<br />Looking forward to that teen /ya story. Keep plodding along!Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-14402582079575843612015-01-27T19:47:24.792-05:002015-01-27T19:47:24.792-05:00Thank you, Tess! If only I had more time to write!...Thank you, Tess! If only I had more time to write! I'm working on a teen/young adult short story at the moment, and between work and commuting I never seem to be able get back to the keyboard. Perhaps I'll add more to this when I get a break.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-35309583004578320082015-01-27T19:44:17.401-05:002015-01-27T19:44:17.401-05:00Thanks! And the ending--is there really someone th...Thanks! And the ending--is there really someone there? Someday I'll have to finish the story!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-64531090570766944542015-01-27T19:21:17.244-05:002015-01-27T19:21:17.244-05:00"The music and laughter that once resounded t..."The music and laughter that once resounded through its rooms were only a dim memory in the minds of a few who remembered its magnificence. " Excellent sentence! It beats on steadily, almost ominously. You've set a wonderfully atmospheric tone here. I'd like to see what else came of this!Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-21436309302902301082015-01-27T17:44:13.897-05:002015-01-27T17:44:13.897-05:00This is wonderful! Beautiful imagery and I love t...This is wonderful! Beautiful imagery and I love the ending. Bravo!injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-78861420688673451412015-01-27T08:07:21.379-05:002015-01-27T08:07:21.379-05:00Thanks you for your kind words, and for taking the...Thanks you for your kind words, and for taking the time to read my story!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-8802705893802924992015-01-27T01:52:15.998-05:002015-01-27T01:52:15.998-05:00Absolutely lovely! You brought the scene alive.Absolutely lovely! You brought the scene alive.Deboshreehttp://paneerandpulao.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-50235156860501144182015-01-25T12:10:12.642-05:002015-01-25T12:10:12.642-05:00Many thanks for reading and commenting! I'm gl...Many thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-18174096884143983642015-01-25T12:08:59.805-05:002015-01-25T12:08:59.805-05:00Thanks! I means a lot when the reader can see what...Thanks! I means a lot when the reader can see what I write!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-62409535444672346982015-01-25T10:35:31.306-05:002015-01-25T10:35:31.306-05:00Great flash fiction piece, I can visualise the dec...Great flash fiction piece, I can visualise the decadent former past of the ruined building. Love it 😊 Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-82009077976930663532015-01-24T07:36:41.533-05:002015-01-24T07:36:41.533-05:00Like they say, only memories remain in the ruins. ...Like they say, only memories remain in the ruins. Beautifully written, Sir:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-51813279641227081222015-01-23T20:57:54.295-05:002015-01-23T20:57:54.295-05:00Thanks! When the editor says it's OK, it must ...Thanks! When the editor says it's OK, it must be OK!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-37196424003318846702015-01-23T20:55:15.262-05:002015-01-23T20:55:15.262-05:00Thanks! It's always great to get a compliment ...Thanks! It's always great to get a compliment from someone who is actually an author (of real books!). I'll get there someday myself - I hope!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-208240859333605982015-01-23T13:43:08.581-05:002015-01-23T13:43:08.581-05:00You totally capture the sense of desertion. Good s...You totally capture the sense of desertion. Good stuff. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-85365198096568883812015-01-23T12:18:44.277-05:002015-01-23T12:18:44.277-05:00Beautifully described, such a sense of distance, o...Beautifully described, such a sense of distance, of loss of the past, and a hint of supernatural...great stuff! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.com