tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post2626373843936535333..comments2023-05-17T06:07:09.567-04:00Comments on K R Smith: FSF Challenge - RainK R Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-60890118789036117062014-07-28T08:04:30.758-04:002014-07-28T08:04:30.758-04:00Thanks! You can feel it from both sides...Thanks! You can feel it from both sides...K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-70469779995779834592014-07-25T23:08:18.714-04:002014-07-25T23:08:18.714-04:00Such emotion...I can feel the heartache. Such emotion...I can feel the heartache. Patriciahttp://patriciasplace.me/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-43768092681529422232014-07-21T07:22:05.686-04:002014-07-21T07:22:05.686-04:00Your post sound like it could be a part of a much ...Your post sound like it could be a part of a much longer story Sounds interesting!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-20066890224746865732014-07-21T07:21:05.021-04:002014-07-21T07:21:05.021-04:00Thanks! That was my hope for this post.Thanks! That was my hope for this post.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-51408990602910586682014-07-21T07:20:12.804-04:002014-07-21T07:20:12.804-04:00I think they will. People who feel emotions strong...I think they will. People who feel emotions strongly have a difficult time hiding them!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-67613957524695052912014-07-21T07:17:25.876-04:002014-07-21T07:17:25.876-04:00I hope so. It would make a good story!
Thanks for...I hope so. It would make a good story!<br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-53509008842553899812014-07-21T07:16:30.299-04:002014-07-21T07:16:30.299-04:00Thank you, Tess. It is often hardest to see what i...Thank you, Tess. It is often hardest to see what is right in front us and to understand what seem to be so clear. I'm hoping they work it out eventually. <br /><br />Sorry it is taking so long to respond to your comments (and to everyone else's)! It's been a busy time for me.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-86580509378244724142014-07-21T07:12:54.257-04:002014-07-21T07:12:54.257-04:00Love can lead us down a torturous path, but the pr...Love can lead us down a torturous path, but the prize can be worth the effort! Perhaps it will work out for these two, given time. K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-54830610652291869972014-07-21T07:09:45.141-04:002014-07-21T07:09:45.141-04:00With a bit of luck, perhaps these two will find ea...With a bit of luck, perhaps these two will find each other - and I'll have another story to write!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-45950627075383528152014-07-21T07:08:28.792-04:002014-07-21T07:08:28.792-04:00Thanks! I have been working on being succinct. Som...Thanks! I have been working on being succinct. Sometimes I use too many words and the impact is lost.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-51612646742212598812014-07-21T07:06:03.095-04:002014-07-21T07:06:03.095-04:00That's great! Sad endings can make a good stor...That's great! Sad endings can make a good story, but happy endings are better in real life!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-78418918089157893342014-07-21T02:18:21.114-04:002014-07-21T02:18:21.114-04:00Oh how incredibly written. That wealth of emotion ...Oh how incredibly written. That wealth of emotion in the last line is so powerful! 'Mine too'. So lovely!<br /><br /><a href="http://shailajav.wordpress.com/2014/07/21/raindrops-on-my-head/" rel="nofollow">Shailaja/The Moving Quill</a>Shailaja Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12639542621638996802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-16943458147587137452014-07-20T07:31:33.860-04:002014-07-20T07:31:33.860-04:00ohhh.. hope they find each love for each other
Ti...ohhh.. hope they find each love for each other<br /><br /><i><b><a href="http://twinklingtinawrites.blogspot.in/2014/07/five-sentence-fiction-standing-in-rain.html" rel="nofollow">Tina from The Sunny Side of Life</a></b></i>Tina Basuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08724918571494327269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-49996814948171330922014-07-20T07:15:37.751-04:002014-07-20T07:15:37.751-04:00I wonder if they'll ever let down their barrie...I wonder if they'll ever let down their barriers enough to realise..??Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16523165887509474035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-25013267291202075682014-07-19T22:19:31.900-04:002014-07-19T22:19:31.900-04:00I feel sad for both of them: the poor blind girl (...I feel sad for both of them: the poor blind girl (who can't see the love in front of her) and the poor longing boy who sees love all to clearly but cannot grasp it.<br /><br />I love how words have the power to encapsulate moments and convey emotions. Well done, K.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-78561114449445959432014-07-19T16:04:06.109-04:002014-07-19T16:04:06.109-04:00When two hearts find common likes, hopes grow wher...When two hearts find common likes, hopes grow where only death used to lie. <br /><br />I'm enchanted by the bit of sunshine you let us glimpse through the downpour. ;-)Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-15919489260789162572014-07-18T15:05:00.119-04:002014-07-18T15:05:00.119-04:00This one really got me, KR. A simple, yet powerfu...This one really got me, KR. A simple, yet powerful expression of real human emotions. Wonderful use of the prompt, too. Bravo!injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7943597480356358309.post-82484712964316157012014-07-18T12:43:49.063-04:002014-07-18T12:43:49.063-04:00Love can be tragic. Fortunately I got an unexpecte...Love can be tragic. Fortunately I got an unexpected reversal of fortune, but so many people don't.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03641358696765770453noreply@blogger.com